Hi Mike,
Just found and put on my 'art critic' spectacles to view this latest rendition.
This for me is a more refined version and conveys to the viewer that a more balanced approach was taken. There's now far less tendency for one's eyes to be drawn away to the edges of the image away from the central theme of the image, the star 'Sadr'. Also the introduction of more colour variation I feel helps to maintain one's interest.
At that resolution unfortunately it's impossible to see if it is more seamless and has better star shapes, but I suspect it probably does. One for the gallery, but first remember to cut it down it down to within an inch of its life.
Cheers
Ray